Dominik Mikulaschek, born in Linz in 1983, has been dissecting the invisible systems of institutional control for over fifteen years. In No Way Out, he leads the reader into the clinically clean world of Eden Hollow, a luxury clinic where every rule is a trap, every smile a weapon, and every door an illusion. His motivation is to reveal the architectures of confinement – not in physical cages, but in psychological and data-based ones. His approach is relentlessly topical: he transfers the real mechanisms of surveillance, psychological pre-incapacitation and legal manipulation into a breathtaking psychological thriller that dispenses with striking monsters and instead unleashes the oppressive logic of a perfect protocol.
Here, Mikulaschek shows how truth is not denied, but systematically rewritten. No Exit is an oppressively realistic study of what happens when the system is not working against you, but has already prescribed a final role for you – that of the guilty party. The author dismantles the façade of authoritative care layer by layer, exposing the cold algorithms of personalised guilt. This thriller thus becomes a haunting parable of our time, a compelling wake-up call for all who know that the most impenetrable prisons often have no walls, but flawless filing cabinets.
Dominik Mikulaschek
No Exit
Those who disappear here were never here.
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Chapter 1 – The briefing (Mara)
The file was slim, an inconspicuous cardboard folder that Detective Rios slid across the table in her kitchen, the sound harsh and final in the silence of the late evening hour. Mara didn't look at the contents, but at the man's hands, which now lay flat on the laminated tabletop, his fingers broad and covered with fine scars, telling of a different kind of work than hers. "It's a night shift," Rios said, his voice a monotonous hum that had to compete with the soft ticking of the refrigerator. "Three nights. Private clinic. You look after a patient, that's all." Mara felt her stomach clench, not because of the work, but because of the way he said it, as if it were a triviality, a small favour between old acquaintances, but there was no acquaintance between them, only a guilty entanglement that had begun two years ago and had hung around her neck like an invisible thread ever since. "I quit that job, Rios. I'm no longer in nursing. You know that." She heard how weak her own voice sounded, a whisper against the wall of indifference he had built around himself. He ignored her, opened the folder and pulled out a single sheet of paper, which he held out to her. It was not a contract, not a job description, it was a floor plan. Lines, rectangles, labelled with sober terms: reception, security desk, patient rooms, therapy room, quiet room, kitchen, storage. Her eyes darted across the drawing, instinctively searching for the arrows, the dotted lines marking escape routes, the green men rushing to the exits. She found none. "Where are the doors?" she asked, her voice now truly breaking. Rios leaned back, his face barely visible in the semi-darkness of the kitchen light. "There are some. They're just not marked on the drawing." That was a lie, she could smell it, bitter and metallic like blood. Every door, every opening to the outside, should have been visible as a symbol, as a break in the line. This plan showed a closed system, a labyrinth with no entrance and, more importantly, no exit. "This is Eden Hollow," Rios continued, as if reading from an invisible script. "A regeneration clinic. Discreet, luxurious, very effective. People pay a lot of money to come here to rest. No mobile phones, no visitors, no distractions. Absolute silence." Mara stared at the floor plan, and the lines began to pulsate, shift, the walls of the plan seemed to build up around her. "Why me?" she squeezed out. "Because you're available. And because you follow instructions." That was the sting, right where it should be. Her availability was his doing, her obedience his invention. He had taken her out of circulation after the incident and had kept her in limbo ever since, where she existed but did not live. This job was the next step in something she didn't understand. "And the patient?" she asked, to buy time to overcome the dizziness emanating from the floor plan. "Sloane Carter. Thirty-four. Burnout, panic attacks, mild self-harm. Harmless. You just have to be there at night, make sure she sleeps and doesn't get any silly ideas. During the day, the ward manager, Dr Locke, is responsible for her." He rattled off the names as if they were items on a list. Mara forced herself to look away from the floor plan and look directly at Rios. There was no warmth in his eyes, no satisfaction, just cold, calculating patience. "What happens if I say no?" she asked, even though she knew the answer. He shrugged almost imperceptibly. "Then the file from two years ago will become interesting again. The witness statements were... inconsistent. Your memory was patchy. It would be a shame if the investigation had to focus on you again." It wasn't a direct threat, it was worse: a simple statement of fact. He owned a part of her past, and he could use it against her at any time. She closed her eyes for a second, breathing in the air that smelled of stale coffee and despair. Three nights. She could get through three nights. "Okay," she said, and the word felt like sand on her tongue. A fleeting smile that expressed no joy fl ly across Rios' face. "Good. You'll go there tomorrow evening. The gate will be opened for you at eight o'clock. You'll hand in your mobile phone and all electronic devices to security. You will be given a uniform and a briefing. Then your shift will begin." He stood up, his chair scraping across the linoleum floor. "And, Mara?" he added as he was already heading for the door. She looked up at him. "Don't forget: 'No exit' is not an oversight. It's the point." Then he was gone, and the silence he left behind was louder than anything he had said. Mara remained behind, her hands clasped around the cold coffee mug, her eyes fixed once more on the floor plan. Eden Hollow. The name sounded peaceful, like gardens and tranquillity. But the plan told a different story. She studied it again, every room, every connecting line. The security switch controlled access to the main wing. The Quiet Room was isolated, accessible only via the therapy wing. And there was something about the storage room, a strange, disproportionate space that seemed to border the basement but had no stairs marked on it. Her fingers ran over the surface of the paper as if she could feel a hidden truth by touch. She suddenly felt cold. It was cold in the kitchen, but that wasn't the reason. A memory rose up in her, vague and painful: another corridor, other doors that wouldn't open, the feeling of concrete walls closing in. She shook her head, banishing the image. That had been then. That was over. This was just a job. Three nights. She could do it. She got up to make herself a cup of tea, a ritual of normality, but her movements were mechanical. As the water sang in the kettle, her gaze kept returning to the floor plan on the table. The lines seemed to burn themselves into her retina. No exit. Rios' words echoed in her mind. Was it a safety precaution? A method to ensure that the rich, stressed clients did not prematurely interrupt their expensive treatment? Or was it something else? She tried to calm herself. She was claustrophobic, she knew that. Confined spaces and locked doors triggered a primitive, deep-seated panic in her. Maybe she was just projecting. Maybe the floor plan was just poorly drawn . Maybe Rios was right, and that was simply the point: absolute isolation for absolute relaxation. The kettle switched off with a loud click. She poured the water over the tea bag and watched as the brown colours spread and clouded the clear water. When she sat back down at the table, she hesitated before pushing the floor plan aside. Underneath it lay a second sheet, a simple service offer containing her personal details, the date and her shift times. At the bottom, in the field for special instructions, was written in Rios's scrawled handwriting: Everything that happens there stays there. Asking questions is not part of your job. She took a sip of tea, but it tasted bitter and useless. The night dragged on, and Mara did not sleep. She packed a small bag with the essentials, put her care cards aside, even though she felt like she was going into battle for which she was not trained. Again and again, she went over the floor plan in her mind, memorising the routes, looking for weak spots, for any detail that might give her hope. She found none. Morning came, pale and sluggish. The day passed as if in a fog. At seven o'clock in the evening, she stood in front of her car, a simple black jacket over her shoulder, the bag in her hand. The drive to Eden Hollow took an hour, the roads grew narrower, the woods denser, the last traces of civilisation disappearing into the twilight darkness. The satnav finally lost the signal, and she followed the written instructions Rios had given her until she stood in front of a tall wrought-iron gate framed by two massive stone pillars. No sign, no number, just the silent, dark tangle of metal bars in front of a paved driveway leading into the forest. She got out of the car. The air was cool and smelled of damp moss and rotting leaves. It was quiet, so quiet that she could hear her own heart beating. She looked for a doorbell or an intercom, but found only a camera discreetly embedded in one of the pillars. She waved uncertainly. For several long seconds, nothing happened. Then, with a deep, metallic sigh, the gate slowly began to open inwards. It moved sluggishly, as if it were rarely used. Mara got back in and slowly drove up the driveway, which was lined with old trees whose branches intertwined above the road to form a dark tunnel. The building suddenly appeared, a modern, flat structure made of glass and dark wood that blended discreetly into the landscape. It looked peaceful, almost inviting, with subdued lighting behind the large windows. She parked in a designated spot next to a black SUV, took her bag and walked towards the main entrance. The glass door opened automatically, and she entered a minimalist reception area with light wood floors, an empty reception desk, and subdued abstract art on the walls. The air smelled of expensive wood and a neutral, sterile cleaning solution. "Mara Stein?" said a voice. A man stepped out of a side corridor. He was tall, broad-shouldered, wearing a dark security uniform that fit perfectly. His face was angular, his hair cropped short, his gaze calm and assessing. "I'm Noah Baird, head of security." He did not offer her his hand. "Welcome to Eden Hollow. Please follow me." His manner was polite but impersonal, like a lock keeper. He led her to a small office behind the reception desk. "Your personal belongings," he said, pointing to a safe on the wall. "Mobile phone, smartwatch, anything with a connection to the outside world. Clinic policy. Detox." Mara hesitated. The feeling of being completely cut off was overwhelming. "Is there a telephone? For emergencies?" Noah nodded. "There's an internal emergency phone on the ward. And walkie-talkies for the security staff." His answer was too smooth, too rehearsed. She took a deep breath and put her mobile phone in the compartment he opened for her. It felt like handing over a lifeline. He closed the safe and turned the key. "Your uniform is in the nurses' station. Dr Locke is expecting you for a brief briefing before you take over the night shift." He led her down another corridor, the doors to the patients' rooms were closed, everything was quiet. In the nurses' station, she found the uniform folded on a chair, simple dark blue hospital clothing. She put it on, the material was soft, but it felt like a disguise. Noah waited outside the door. "Come with me." She followed him to an office at the end of the corridor. The door was open. Dr Miriam Locke sat behind a simple desk and looked up as they entered. She was a woman in her fifties with grey-streaked hair cut in an elegant bob and a warm, open face. She smiled, and it reached her eyes, which were a soft grey. "Mara. Welcome. Thank you so much for stepping in at such short notice." Her voice was calm, inviting, the voice of a person you immediately wanted to trust. Mara felt an unexpected wave of relief. Maybe she had been wrong. Maybe this really was just a quiet place. "No problem," she murmured. Dr Locke stood up and came around the table. "Let me explain the most important rules to you. Our guiding principle here is discretion and safety. For our clients and for our team." She placed her hands folded on the table in front of her. "Firstly: no private contact with the outside world during your shift. Second: the night log must be kept complete and countersigned by the day nurse in the morning. Third: all doors to the therapy and rest areas are locked at night. If you need to move outside the ward area, please report this in advance by radio to Security. And fourth..." She paused briefly, and her gaze intensified for a moment. "...the Quiet Room is a sacred space for intensive, therapeutic rest. It is to be entered only in extreme emergencies and only after consulting with me or Mr Baird. Is that clear?" Mara nodded. The rules sounded strict, but not unusual for a closed facility. "The patient, Sloane Carter, is in room four. She is on medication, so she should be asleep. Your job is to check on her regularly and ensure general calm. Any questions?" Mara shook her head. "Good." Dr Locke smiled again. "Jessa Lin, our night nurse, is already here. She will show you around the ward. I wish you a peaceful shift." The farewell was friendly but clear. Mara left the office, accompanied by Noah back to the nurses' station. Jessa Lin was a young woman with tired eyes and a shy smile. She showed Mara the ward, the medication room, the kitchen, and finally pointed to a door at the end of a short side corridor. "This is the quiet room," she said quietly. "As Dr Locke said... it's better to keep the door closed." Then she led Mara to a small office with a desk and a computer. "This is where you keep the log. The emergency phone is over there." She pointed to an old-fashioned white telephone on the wall. "Does it work?" Mara asked, almost reflexively. Jessa seemed to hesitate for a moment. "It's for internal emergencies. Security, doctor, things like that." Then, almost whispering, she added, "I'm going to do my rounds now. You can start here." And she disappeared. Mara was alone. The silence was now absolute, interrupted only by the soft hum of the air conditioning. She sat down at the desk, started the computer and opened the digital logbook. The interface was sparse and user-unfriendly. She tried to open a page in the browser, but a pop-up immediately blocked access: Network blocked for security reasons. Detox. She leaned back and rubbed her temples. The room was small, the air stuffy. She got up and went to the window. Outside, it was pitch black; the glass reflected her own pale face. She turned around and her gaze fell on the emergency telephone. She stepped closer, picked up the receiver – and heard nothing. Not even a dial tone, not even the sound of static on the line. It was dead, completely silent. A cold shiver ran down her spine. She put the receiver down and stepped back. At that moment, as she turned around, she saw it: high up in the corner of the hallway, outside her office, a small black box with a tiny red dot in the middle. A camera. Dr Locke had said there was no surveillance inside. Mara froze, blood rushing in her ears. The red light flashed once, slowly, like a knowing eye winking. Then the door to the ward corridor behind her closed with a soft but unmistakable click. It was the sound of a key being turned from the outside, or an electronic bolt engaging. Mara spun around, her hand flying to the handle. She pressed down on it. The door did not budge. It was locked. Her breath caught in her throat, claustrophobia gripping her with cold fingers and pressing against her chest. She was locked in. On the ward. For the night. Panicked, she looked around, searching for another way out, for a button, an intercom. Nothing. Only the silent walls, the dead telephone receiver, the flashing red eye of the camera and the oppressive, perfect silence of Eden Hollow. Rios' voice echoed in her head: No exit is the point. And then, slowly, she realised that the click of the door had not been the end of the admission. It was the beginning. And as she walked back to the desk, she saw that there was a single folded sheet of paper on the freshly cleaned surface that hadn't been there before. With trembling fingers, she smoothed it out. It was a form, already partially filled out. At the top it said: Movement Log – Night 1. And below that, in typewritten letters, her name: Mara Stein.
Chapter 2 – The Protocol (Mara)
The sheet of paper felt cold and unfamiliar beneath her fingers, the letters of her name seemed to be pressed into the woody paper, a permanent mark in this transient world. Mara took a deep breath, forcing the panic back into her chest, where it beat against her ribs like a trapped animal. She couldn't give in now; she had to think, understand the rules of this game, which she didn't know if it even existed or if it was just her own claustrophobic paranoia. She dropped the movement log on the desk and focused on the door. It was made of solid wood, with a sturdy handle and a modern lock that had no keyhole, just a small green LED dot that was now glowing red. An electronic lock. She knocked, first softly, then louder. "Hello? Is anyone there? The door is locked." Her voice sounded hollow in the silence of the small office. No answer. Only the constant, quiet hum of the ventilation. Her gaze darted back to the camera in the corner. The red dot flashed steadily, a metronomic signal documenting her imprisonment. She had to act as if this were normal. Maybe it was an accident. Maybe the door locked automatically at night for security reasons. Maybe it was standard protocol. She tried to calm herself and sat back down in the chair in front of the computer. The screen still displayed the network lock message. She closed the window and opened the digital log programme instead. It was a simple interface with timestamps, drop-down menus for "patient check", "medication administration" and "special incidents". She had to document her first round. That was her job. It gave her direction. She stood up, picked up the movement log, and tried again to open the door. It still wouldn't budge. Then she noticed a small black box next to the door frame that she had overlooked before. A card reader. She didn't have a card. She searched the desk drawers, finding only paper clips and blank forms. No card. She was truly locked in. A new wave of fear washed over her, cold and clear. She knocked on the door again, this time with her fist. "Hello! I'm locked in! Jessa? Noah?" Her cries were swallowed by the thick wood. She waited, her ear pressed against the door. Nothing. Then, after what felt like an eternity but was probably only two minutes, she heard footsteps on the other side. Soft, approaching footsteps. The door opened with a soft hum, and Noah Baird stood in the doorway, his broad frame filling the entrance. His face was a mask of professional neutrality. "Can I help you?" he asked, his voice calm, without surprise. "The door was locked," Mara said, trying to keep her own tone under control. "I couldn't get out." Noah nodded slowly, as if this were a familiar fact. "The doors to the ward areas lock automatically at night. Security protocol. You could have called me on the radio." He nodded toward a radio clipped to the belt of his security brace combination. "I don't have one," Mara said. A fleeting expression, almost like amusement, flitted across his face. "We'll have to change that. Come with me." He stepped aside and let her out of the office. The hallway was still brightly lit and deathly quiet. He led her back to the security office near the reception area, opened a wall cabinet and handed her a heavy black radio. "Channel one for security. Channel two if you need the night nurse. Press, talk, release. Simple." She took it, its weight reassuring, a tool, a connection. "And the emergency phone?" she asked, watching his reaction closely. "Does it work?" Noah shrugged. "It's connected to our switchboard. When you pick it up, a light comes on here. It's for internal emergencies. If someone falls or needs medical attention. Not for..." He made a vague gesture with his hand. "...door problems." His explanation sounded smooth, but she noticed his gaze drift to the side for a split second when he mentioned the phone. "So it's okay?" she pressed. "Absolutely," he said, his tone putting the topic to rest once and for all. "I'll show you the most important safety features now. So you feel safe." The word "safe" sounded like a code coming from his mouth. He led her through the main hallway, pointing to the magnetic contacts on the doors to the therapy wing. "If any of these doors are opened outside of permitted hours, a silent alarm sounds at my end. The same applies to the main entrance and the fire doors." "Fire doors?" Mara asked. "Of course," said Noah, stopping in front of an unmarked steel door at the end of a side corridor. "Fire safety regulations." He pressed down on the horizontal bar, the door creaked open, and an icy night breeze blew in. Mara took a step forward and looked into a narrow, concrete alley between the main building and a wall bordering the forest. The alley led into darkness in both directions. An escape route. Her heart skipped a beat. "Where does it lead?" she asked. "Around the building. To the emergency exits on the east and west sides and to the back yard," Noah explained calmly, closing the door again until it clicked shut with a dull thud. "They can't be opened from the outside, only from the inside. Standard." It was a logical, reassuring reference to normality. But something about his demonstration felt like a guided tour of a prison. As they walked back to the ward corridor, he stopped in front of the door to the Quiet Room. The door was made of solid wood, with a sturdy lock and a small, barred viewing window at eye level. "Here," he said, his voice dropping a notch, "special rules apply. Access is only granted with a PIN code entered by Dr Locke or myself. It's a therapeutic room, not a cell. But the privacy and safety of the clients who use it is our top priority." Mara peered through the bars. The room behind it was dimly lit; she could make out a simple couch, a narrow cupboard and a wall painted in a soothing shade of blue. Nothing threatening. And yet, the term "quiet room" triggered a deep, instinctive unease in her. "Understood," she said simply. Noah looked her over for a moment, as if to make sure her willingness to cooperate was genuine. "Good. Your main task is to keep things quiet. Do your rounds, document them. If anything unusual happens, call me. Not the police, not an outside doctor. Me. All right?" It was an instruction, not a question. Mara nodded. "All right." "Good. Then I wish you a quiet shift." He nodded briefly to her and walked down the corridor, his footsteps quiet and determined on the linoleum floor. Mara stayed behind, the radio in her hand suddenly feeling like a surveillance device. She returned to her office, leaving the door open this time. She sat down and began to document her first official round in the system. Time stamp: 21:47. Patient Sloane Carter, Room 4: Resting, breathing regular, no abnormalities. She saved the entry and got up to actually check on the patient. The corridor was long and quiet, with only the dim light of the night lights on. Room four was the second-to-last door on the right. She opened it quietly and peered inside. In the glow of the night light, she could make out the outline of a sleeping woman under the covers, her shoulders rising and falling regularly. Everything seemed fine. She closed the door and walked back. On the way, she saw Jessa Lin quietly coming out of a medicine cabinet in the treatment room. The young nurse flinched when she saw Mara, as if she hadn't expected her. "Ah, hello. Everything okay?" Jessa whispered. "So far, yes," Mara said. "Noah gave me a radio." Jessa nodded hastily, her gaze darting down the hallway. "Good. That's good. I... I still have to prepare the medication for tomorrow." She wanted to continue on her way, but Mara stopped her with a question. "Jessa? The emergency phone... do you use it often?" Jessa's eyes widened for a moment, then she shook her head, almost too vigorously. "No. Actually, never. It's more... there. You know? Just in case." She smiled a pained smile. "I really have to..." And she scurried away, back into the brightly lit medication room. Mara watched her go. The fear in Jessas' eyes was real. She went back to her desk, but the feeling of confinement was now replaced by a new feeling: the feeling of being watched , of being stuck in a system whose rules she didn't fully understand. She decided to take her own unofficial tour to explore her surroundings. She walked down the main corridor, past the closed doors of the other patients' rooms, which all appeared to be empty, to the end, where a double door marked "Therapy & Relaxation" separated her from the rear of the clinic. It was locked. She followed another short corridor that led to the kitchen and a small staff lounge. Everything was clean, tidy, sterile. In the kitchen hung a wall telephone, a simpler model than the one at her station. She picked it up. Dead. No dial tone. She tried the line, but it was the same empty, soundless nothingness. Slowly, with methodical thoroughness, she checked every telephone she could find: one in the lounge, one in a small alcove next to the main entrance hall. All dead. All dummies. Her initial suspicion solidified into certainty. The emergency telephone was a facade, part of the staging of security. She returned to the ward, her heart now pounding not with fear but with a cold, clear anger. She was here to guard a patient in a building that allowed no functioning connection to the outside world. Why? The official explanation was "detox," digital abstinence. But this went beyond that. This was isolation. She sat down at the computer and tried to log into other systems, access patient records, the gate logs. Everything was password-protected or blocked from her access. She was a servant with minimal rights in a perfectly sealed-off world. Time passed slowly. She made her documented rounds to Sloane's room every two hours. The woman was still sleeping, unchanged. Around one o'clock in the morning, Mara was overcome by a leaden tiredness, a mixture of adrenaline withdrawal and the unnatural silence. She went to the kitchen to get some water and ran into Jessa again, who was sitting at a table staring into a cup. "Tough night?" Mara asked cautiously. Jessa looked up as if she had forgotten her. "Same as always. Quiet. That's good." Her words sounded rehearsed. Mara didn't sit down, leaning against the worktop instead. "Have you been working here long?" "About a year," said Jessa, taking a sip from her cup. "It's a good job. Quiet. They leave you alone." "And the rules? The locked doors? Doesn't that bother you?" Jessa shrugged, but her fingers tightened around the cup. "It's safe here. Safer than the big clinics in the city. Nothing happens here." She said it as if to convince herself. "What if something does happen?" Mara pressed. "What about the emergency phone?" Jessa froze. Her eyes filled with panic. "We don't use that. It's... it's not for that. If anything happens, you call Noah. Always Noah. Don't forget that." She stood up abruptly and rinsed her cup. "I have something else to do." And she was gone again. Mara was left alone in the kitchen. Jessa's words echoed in her mind: Always Noah. The radio on her belt now felt like a dog leash. She returned to her desk and tried to stay awake. Her thoughts revolved around the floor plan, the dead phones, Jessa's fear and Noah's controlled demonstration of "safety". She opened a drawer and pulled out the movement log for night one. Next to the pre-printed lines for patient checks was a column for "comments" and "signature". The signature line was blank. But above it, in the field for the initial review by the ward manager, there was already an abbreviation: "ML" – Miriam Locke. So the log wasn't just for her. It was being monitored. Every movement, every step was recorded and signed off. She turned the form over. On the back, in small print, were general instructions. One caught her eye: Insurance coverage is suspended if you leave the assigned ward area without first notifying security. It was a threat, hidden in legalese. She put the paper away and looked at her watch. 03:17. The deepest hour of the night. The silence was now so absolute that she could hear a buzzing in her own ears. She decided to make one last round, this time not only to Sloane's room, but also to take a quick look in the other direction of the corridor, away from the ' ' ward, towards the area Noah had called 'Therapy & Relaxation'. She took the radio with her, just in case the door was open after all. The corridor was empty. The double door was still locked. She pressed down on the handles, to no avail. Then she noticed something. A cold draught was coming from under the door, in the gap between the floor and the wood. Colder than the air-conditioned air in the corridor. It felt like basement air. She knelt down and tried to see through the narrow gap. Nothing but darkness. But the draught was definitely there. So there was a basement, or at least a lower floor adjacent to this hallway. The floor plan didn't show a basement. She stood up, her back aching from the tense posture. As she turned to go back, she saw him. Noah. He was standing at the other end of the hallway, right where it merged into the main area, motionless, watching her. She didn't know how long he had been standing there. His face was impossible to read in the semi-darkness. Mara froze, her hand clenched around the radio. She expected a question, a challenge. Instead, he simply raised his hand slowly and beckoned her over with a gesture that was not pleading, but commanding. Obediently, almost as if remote-controlled, she walked towards him. As she got closer, she saw that he didn't seem angry, not even suspicious. He just seemed... present. "Can I help you, Mara?" he asked, his voice a soft, steady murmur. "I... I was just doing a round," she said, hearing how weak it sounded. "The draught under the door... I thought..." He nodded as if he already knew what she was going to say. "The air conditioning. The pipes run under the floor. Sometimes there's a draught." It was a smooth, technical explanation that left no questions unanswered. "You should stay at your ward now," he continued. "It's late. The patient needs rest. And so do you." It was a gentle order. Mara nodded. "Yes. Of course." He stepped aside to let her pass, and she walked past him back into the brightly lit corridor of her ward. She felt his gaze on the back of her neck until she turned the corner. Back at her desk, her tiredness had vanished, replaced by an alert, hyper-alert nervousness. She had achieved nothing. She had been observed, checked and sent back to her place. She opened the digital log and entered her last round. When she clicked "Save", a small pop-up window appeared: Entry saved and transmitted to ML. Dr Locke would see every one of her documented movements in the morning. She leaned back and stared at the flashing camera guard in the corner. The red dot seemed to be staring directly at her face. She reached under the desk, found the monitor cable and carefully pulled it out of the socket. The screen went blank with a soft sigh. She waited. Nothing happened. No alarm, no one came running. The camera light continued to flash. So it had its own power supply. She plugged the monitor back in. The night crept on. Around five in the morning, she heard soft footsteps and the clatter of tablet dishes coming from the kitchen. Jessa was probably preparing breakfast. The sky outside the windows remained pitch black, the dense woods blocking out the first light of dawn. At six, Dr. Locke appeared, fresh and cheerful in a light cashmere jumper. "Good morning, Mara. How was your night?" she asked as she booted up the computer to check the log. "Quiet," Mara replied in her most professional voice. "Patient Carter slept through the night." Dr Locke nodded as she scrolled across the screen. "Very good. I see you've been conscientious. I appreciate that." She looked up. "You can go now. Your car is still outside. The gate will open automatically when you approach. See you tonight."" The discharge was so routine and normal that Mara doubted her own perception for a moment. Maybe she had overreacted. Maybe Eden Hollow really was just a strict, discreet clinic. She nodded, stood up, and walked to the safe, where Noah was already waiting to return her mobile phone. He didn't smile, but he nodded to her. "See you tonight." She took the mobile phone, put it in her pocket and walked through the quiet entrance hall to the door. It opened in front of her. The morning air outside was freezing cold and pure, a contrast to the stuffy, clinical air inside. She took a deep breath and walked to her car. As she got in and started the engine, she felt an almost overwhelming sense of relief. She was out. She had survived the first night. As she drove down the driveway to the gate, she took one last look in the rear-view mirror. The Eden Hollow building lay dark and silent, with only a few security lights on. Then it disappeared around a bend. The gate opened slowly, she drove through and heard it close behind her. Once on the country road, she turned on her mobile phone. Messages and notifications flooded in, welcoming her back to the normal world. But the feeling of relief did not last long. It was replaced by a gnawing, deep unease. The dead phones. The cold draught under the door. Jess's panicked look. Noah's omnipresent control. And above all: that click of the door locking at the beginning of her shift. She hadn't just been a nurse working a night shift. She had been a prisoner released on parole. And she had to go back. Tonight. The second night. As she drove home, a thought occurred to her, clear and inescapable: Rios hadn't sent her to a job. He had lured her into a trap. And the trap had just snapped shut.
Chapter 3 – The Counting (Mara)
Chapter 4 – The Red Eye (Mara)