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Turn your inspiration into a story with clear, expert guidance Creative Writing Exercises For Dummies is a step-by-step creative writing course designed to hone your craft, regardless of ability. Written by the founder of the Complete Creative Writing Course at London's Groucho Club, this activity-based guide walks you through the process of developing and writing in a wide range of genres including novels, short stories and creative nonfiction. The book includes writing prompts, exercises, mind maps, flow charts and diagrams designed to get your ideas flowing. You'll get expert guidance into character development, plot structure and prose, plus extensive insight into self-editing and polishing your work. Whether you're a new writer with a seed of an idea you would like to develop, or are looking to strengthen your creative writing skills, this book has you covered. Covering every aspect of narrative, from setting initial goals to formatting a manuscript, Creative Writing Exercises For Dummies provides the tools and instruction you need to make your story the best it can be. * Learn to spark your imagination and sketch out ideas * Create compelling characters and paint a picture with description * Develop your plot and structure and maintain continuity * Step back from your work and become your own ruthless editor The rise of e-books has opened up the publishing world, even to non-established writers. If you have a story you're dying to tell but aren't sure how, Creative Writing Exercises For Dummies is the clear, concise solution you need.
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Table of Contents
Introduction
About This Book
Foolish Assumptions
Icons Used in This Book
Beyond the Book
Where to Go from Here
Part I: Getting Started with Creative Writing Exercises
Chapter 1: Preparing to Create Your Written Masterpiece
Planning for the Writing Journey
Setting your writing goals
Locating the appropriate genre
Creating the right title
Discovering the scope of your book
Silencing the inner critic
Reviewing the Creative Writing Process
Taking your first steps
Gearing up for the long haul
Writing in a spiral path
Using creative writing exercises
Living with Creative Confusion
Allowing yourself to make mistakes
Writing what you want to write
Chapter 2: Sketching Out Ideas
Getting Your Creative Juices Flowing
Starting with your first thoughts
Creating a mind map of ideas
Brainstorming: Creative idea sessions
Moving Beyond Words withObjects and Images
Keeping a scrapbook of ideas and materials
Finding images related to your project
Using objects to enhance your writing
Considering the Level of Research Required
Part II: Realising That Character Is Everything
Chapter 3: Developing Your Characters’ Backgrounds
Creating Seriously Deep Characters
Detailing your character’s family tree
That reminds me! Exploring characters’ memories
Seeing into a character’s CV
Setting out a character’s timeline
Using Diaries, Letters and Reminiscences in Your Writing
Chapter 4: Creating Drama through Dialogue
Recognising Great Dialogue
Drafting and Developing Dialogue
Talking about dialogue basics
Getting up close and personal: Face-to-face dialogue
Ringing the changes: Phone conversations
Making the Best Use of Dialogue
Deciding where and when conversations happen
Creating and handling conflict
Hinting at what’s hidden: Subtext
Chapter 5: Embodying Your Characters
Building a Body for Your Characters to Inhabit
Inventing and describing major characters
Rounding out minor characters
Getting Under a Character’s Skin
Thinking about emotional make-up
Coping with sickness
Constructing Characters’ Activities
Surrounding Your Characters with Physical Objects
Owning up to your characters’ possessions
Choosing what to wear
Chapter 6: Developing Your Dialogue-Writing Skills
Conveying Individuality and Character through Dialogue
Feeling for foreign accents
Dealing with dialect
Nailing down your use of slang
Getting quirky with speech quirks
Don’t All Shout at Once! Coping with Crowds
Producing Effective Speeches and Monologues
Imparting information
Interviewing and making presentations
Going it alone: Interior monologues
Chapter 7: Conveying Characters’ Thoughts in Style
Exploring Ways to Set Down Characters’ Thoughts
Dramatising Characters’ Thoughts and Feelings Effectively
Thinking in the real world
Gesturing towards body language
Capturing a character’s inner voice
Enjoying the Flexibility of Free Indirect Style
Chapter 8: Choosing and Using Different Points of View
‘From Where I’m Standing’: The Importance of Taking a View
Experimenting with Voices and Viewpoints
Using ‘I’, the first-person voice
Using ‘you’, the second-person voice
‘He said, she said’: Using the third-person voice, limited to one character
On the outside looking in: Employing an outside narrator
Five third-person narrative styles
Adopting More Than One Viewpoint
Choosing the number and type of narrators
Balancing and structuring your viewpoints
Chapter 9: Creating Complicated, Well-Rounded Characters
Adding Layers to Your Characters
Revealing depth through experiences
Remembering basic human needs
Looking at different areas of your character’s life
Workplace relationships
Passing the time with hobbies and interests
Confounding expectations and creating contradictions
Depicting Sexuality and Gender
Risking the wrath of your grandmother: Writing about sex
Finding the right words
Considering Other Ways to Add Character Depth
Employing lies, half-truths and evasions
Sharing and keeping secrets
Multiplying misunderstandings
Part III: Painting the Picture with Description
Chapter 10: Navigating the Locations in Your Stories
Choosing and Conveying a Setting
Making your characters feel at home
Travelling to exotic lands . . . by book
Creating a Location’s Fine Detail
Using maps for realism
Imagining and recording the finer points
Inventing Your Own World: Fantasy and Science Fiction
Chapter 11: Appreciating the Power of the Senses
Creating a Colourful, Meaningful World
Giving associations to colours
Colouring in scenes and characters
Listening to Sound and Music on the Page
Sensing scenic sounds
Making musical moments
Sparking Emotions with Smell
Tantalising with Taste and Food
Feeling Your Way with Touch and Texture
Chapter 12: Getting Things Done: Describing Action and Activity
Watching Characters Tackling Everyday Tasks
Homing in on domestic life
Working at creating a work life
Chilling out to reveal character at play
Writing Dramatic Action Scenes
Choosing the best words for action scenes
Controlling a huge cast
Portraying Violence and Its Effects
Chapter 13: Building Character with Objects and Possessions
Giving Your Characters Significant Possessions
Choosing objects to use
Owning objects(and being owned by them)
Remembering to Use Objects to Spark Memories!
Representing Characters: Objects as Symbols
Same object, different meaning
Making use of magical objects and superstitions
Getting(metaphorically) emotional
Experiencing unexpected meetings with objects
Creating Clues to Your Character
Using objects to stand in for aspects of your characters
Seeing things in the dark
Chapter 14: Using Description to Create Atmosphere and . . . and . . . Suspense!
Adding Ambience and Atmosphere
Choosing your words carefully
Enhancing character and atmosphere with description
Foreshadowing Events for Suspense
Omens and prophecies
Anticipating the future with objects and events
Writing in All Weathers and All Year Round
Working with the weather
Using the seasons
Handling the Uncanny
Seeing ghosts
Dabbling in doubles
Conjuring up curious coincidences
Receiving visions and visitations
Creating suspense in your sleep: Dreams and premonitions
Chapter 15: Managing Metaphors, Similes and Symbols
Employing Metaphors to Deepen Your Writing
Entering the world of the metaphor
Finding a controlling metaphor
Avoiding metaphor clichés . . . like the plague!
Personifying: A heading that jumps for joy!
Substituting Similes That Fit Like a Glove
Appreciating the strength of a simile
Making the best use of similes
Standing for Something with Symbols
Using universal symbols
Investigating individual symbols
Dreaming up some dream symbolism
Delving into the deepest of meanings
Chapter 16: Describing the Ineffable: Saying What Can’t Be Said
Handling the Ineffable: When Words Fail
Defining the difficulties of the inexpressible
Attempting to communicate subjective experiences
Revealing the Mysterious with Literary Devices
Defamiliarising to see the world anew
Experimenting with the rhythm of sentences
Listening to the sounds of words
Using the Contradictory to Communicate the Ineffable
Playing with paradox
Creating ambiguity
Part IV: Developing Your Plot and Structure
Chapter 17: Writing a Gripping Opening
Introducing the Art of the Opening
Starting somewhere, anywhere
Locating a great place to start
Avoiding common mistakes
Discovering Openings from the Greats
Making a statement: Philosophical openings
Speaking from the start: Dialogue openings
Intriguing readers with odd-narrator openings
Holding on for an exciting ride: Dramatic events
Beginning with a bang: Firing-squad openings
Setting the scene with descriptive openings
Waking up your readers: Science-fiction openings
Going for the obvious: Statement-of-fact openings
Chapter 18: Plotting Your Way to Great Stories
Intriguing Readers with a Core Question
Propelling Your Plot with Motivation and Conflict
Revealing characters’ motivation
Creating conflict
Handling Plot Coincidences – with Care
Keeping Readers on Their Toes
Making twists and turns
Delivering shocks and surprises
Chapter 19: Making Good (Use of) Time in Your Writing
Working with Time in Conventional Narratives
Jumping over the dull bits
Stretching out with sagas and lifetimes
Living life in one hectic day
Looking Over Your Shoulder at the Past
Handling flashbacks
I knew that would happen! Writing with hindsight
Playing Around with Time
Leaping into the future
Mixing up time
Travelling through time
Chapter 20: Structuring a Longer Work of Fiction
Dividing Your Work into Parts, Chapters and Scenes
Partitioning into parts
Chatting about chapters
Writing complete scenes
Linking Different Narrative Threads
Spinning subplots
Trying different subplot structures
Playing with Structure
Becoming more complex
Chapter 21: Tightening the Tension to Enthral Readers
Introducing the Art of Creating Suspense
Investigating Ways to Turn the Screws
Pushing the narrative for tension’s sake
Sowing clues into the story
Constructing cliffhangers
Creating a gap in the narrative
Chapter 22: Expanding Your Ideas into Larger Narratives
Expanding Your Work with the Characters
Connecting with new characters
Involving characters in new plot lines
Complicating your characters’ lives
Weaving characters into new timeframes
Using Narrative and Plot to Expand Your Story
Bringing in big themes
Threading together themes and subjects
Spanning events with a bridge story
Chapter 23: Approaching the Grand Finale: The End’s in Sight!
Preparing for the End
Climbing aboard the story arc
Bringing all the threads together
Building up to the climax
Producing Your Story’s Highpoint: The Climax
Understanding the climactic scene
Changing everything in a single line
Answering the central narrative question
Throwing in the unexpected
Writing the Final Scene
Tying up loose ends
Choosing your type of ending
Perfecting Your Last Line
Looking at types of great last line
Coming full circle
Part V: Polishing Your Product: Revising and Editing
Chapter 24: Reviewing and Rewriting Your Work
Reacquainting Yourself with Your First Draft
Leaving your first draft alone for a while
Reading your work in one go
Speaking up: Reading your work aloud (but perhaps not in public)
Making Major Changes to Your Initial Draft
Taking a different viewpoint
Changing character and location names
Altering the story’s structure
Considering other large reworkings
Restructuring Your Story: Second Draft
Working on the overall structure
Weaving in those loose threads
Checking the timeline
Fixing fundamental flaws
Chapter 25: Whipping Your Work into Shape
Looking with a Fresh Pair of Eyes
Searching for the obvious and the obscure
Dealing with redundant characters
Considering the order of scenes
Cutting Redundant Material
Stopping overly long dialogue
Trimming interior monologue
Keeping your back story to yourself
Getting to the point: Avoiding summary
Giving out too much information
Adding Necessary Details
Making Your Writing Sparkle
Weeding out clichés
Tightening up your sentences
Chapter 26: Polishing Your Work for Publication
Carrying Out Your Final Read-Through
Correcting continuity errors
Spelling and punctuating correctly
Spotting grammatical errors
Making the Presentation Professional
Complying with publishing conventions
Displaying dialogue
Part VI: The Part of Tens
Chapter 27: Ten Top Aids for Writers
Getting a Notebook – and Using It!
Keeping a Decent Pen on You
Having a Good Dictionary and Thesaurus
Buying the Best Computer and Printer You Can Afford
Blocking Out Your Writing Time in a Diary
Investing in a Desk and Chair
Putting Up a ‘Do Not Disturb’ Sign
Surrounding Yourself with Great Books
Backing Up Your Work Regularly
Drinking Coffee – But Not Too Much!
Chapter 28: Ten Great Ways to Stay the Course
Bribing Yourself with a Major Reward to Finish
Promising Yourself Minor Rewards for Meeting Targets
Banishing the Inner Critic
Finding a Supportive Reader
Accepting the Bad Days Along with the Good
Writing Every Day
Taking a Writing Course
Joining a Writers’ Circle
Searching for a Mentor
Believing in Yourself
About the Author
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Creative writers come in all shapes and sizes. Put the stereotyped bespectacled introvert, hunched over a desk in a dusty attic, out of your mind: no ‘typical’ writer exists. Whatever your background, age or current situation, if you have the enthusiasm and discipline, you can become a writer.
I designed this book to help you write a novel, a collection of short stories or a piece of narrative fiction or non-fiction. I made it as practical as possible, filling it with exercises and examples from the greats so that you can progress from your first vague ideas through to a completed manuscript.
Without doubt, writing is difficult. One of the main obstacles is that it’s a lonely business and often no one’s around to help or support you along the way. Plus, creative writing techniques are poorly taught at school, and most education seems designed to drum the creativity out of you, with its focus on grades, results and ticking the right boxes. This regimented approach makes being creative later in life difficult.
All children are naturally creative, and I believe that adults are at their happiest when being creative too. However, taking up an art or a craft after you’ve finished your education is often hard, because you haven’t had the initial training or practice you need. For physical pursuits, you may no longer have the manual strength or dexterity you had as a child (for example, it’s hard to be a musician or dancer without physical strength and if you haven’t put in the early training). Also some arts or crafts are expensive to practise – paint and canvas can be pricey, sculptors need costly materials to carve into. But writing is something that everyone can do, at any age.
You’ve picked up this book and are reading this passage, and so you’re clearly interested in creative writing. I encourage you to use this book to turn that interest into a concrete reality.
I’ve been leading creative writing classes for 15 years, and I love teaching almost as much as I love writing. One of its pleasures is coming up with relevant texts to illustrate particular topics and devising interesting exercises that help people to develop new techniques and their craft.
Over these years I’ve collected a large bank of texts and exercises that have worked well in class, and I’ve been able to ditch quietly the ones I tried that didn’t turn out to be so helpful. I know that the exercises in this book help writers to take their projects forward, because I’ve seen the great results. Many of the students who’ve taken my courses started off with a vague idea and, by progressing through the different levels from beginner courses to advanced workshops, ended up with complete drafts of novels. If you work your way through all the exercises in the book, in whatever order you choose, you can achieve the same.
Often I read through a final draft and see the exercises I set during the classes blended skilfully into a complete narrative. By completing all the exercises, these writers have been able to start with the opening pages, develop their characters and storyline, and tackle all the different aspects of creating good fiction. Some of these novels have finally been published. One or two have even won prizes.
Seeing these writers take their first tentative steps into fiction is a pleasure and a privilege, as is watching them progress as they gain confidence and develop their voice and their skills. All the writers who finish their projects realise that writing takes a huge amount of commitment and hard work. They also learn to trust their instincts about what they want to write and the way they want to write it. They were willing to learn and remained open to feedback and new ways of working. You too can be like them!
In writing this book, I make some assumptions about you:
You enjoy books and reading. All kinds of reading are good, but this book is mainly concerned with narrative fiction and non-fiction – in other words, books that tell a story. Books are about characters, and so I also assume that you’re fundamentally interested in human nature – what people do and why they do it. I refer to a lot of books that I’ve read, and you’ll notice that the same books come up again and again. This is because they’re well constructed, contain characters you can believe in and illustrate many points so beautifully. I suggest you read these books if you haven’t already.You want to write a full-length book. This can be a novel, a memoir, a travelogue, a biography or a collection of stories – anything that has a narrative element. Many of the exercises in this book are equally useful for someone writing a play, a screenplay or any other kind of extended narrative.You want your book to be as good as you can possibly make it. Lots of poorly written or unoriginal books are published and have even sold in good quantities, but I assume that you want to aim for the best rather than imitate the mediocre. Even ‘bad’ books must have appealing aspects to them if they find an audience, but you still don’t want to settle for less than the best you can achieve.You want to work hard and improve at your writing. Writing at any length doesn’t come easily to many people, and creative writing is different from the kind of factual writing that people tend to do in their everyday lives. With this book, you have the opportunity to develop new techniques and ways of writing and to try out new skills. If you come to this book already thinking that you know everything about writing and have already decided exactly how you’re going to proceed, you aren’t going to get much out of this book.To make finding your way around this book as easy as possible, I use little drawings in the margins, called icons, to highlight important information.
I highlight important advice and tricks of the trade with this icon.
This icon draws your attention to information that you may want to come back to and bear in mind while you’re writing.
I like to illustrate points I make with concrete examples to make them more memorable. I suggest that you look at the relevant passages in the books yourself.
This book is packed with helpful exercises designed to take your writing forward. Don’t just read about them – do them!
As you work your way through the book, don’t forget to look at the bonus material available at www.dummies.com/extras/creativewritingexercises.
You can find the book’s cheat sheet at www.dummies.com/cheatsheet/creativewritingexercises.
You can use this book in a number of ways:
You can go through the contents and find an area that especially interests you or where you feel you need particular help.You can work through the early chapters in each part, which give more basic information, and then read the later chapters.You can turn the page and start reading at the beginning, progressing through to the end.Whichever way you use the book, I recommend that you do all the exercises as you go. If you complete every exercise in this book, you’ll soon be a long way along the road to completing your writing project.
Best of luck with all your creative writing!
Part I
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Set yourself some simple targets that you can use to help you make progress.Look at ways to define the theme of your writing project and to keep yourself motivated.Find useful tools and techniques to get your imagination going and inspire you on your way.Understand the creative process, with plenty of tips to get you started and support you on your writing journey.Chapter 1
In This Chapter
Starting your creative writing
Thinking about the process
Embracing confusion
The saying goes that all people have a book inside them. Certainly, all people have their own life stories and many want to write theirs down; everybody has dreams, ideas, hopes and fears, as well as a certain amount of imagination. All that most people lack is the courage and know-how to turn their chosen idea into a story that others want to read.
Many people think that if you want to be a writer, you have to leave your job (or never start one!) and sit all day in a freezing garret. In fact, most writers have other jobs as well – because they have to! Writers write in bed in the mornings before anyone else is awake, they stay up late writing when everyone else has gone to bed, they write on their commute to work, they write in their lunch hours, they write in any small bit of time they have. They write because they want to and because they have something unique to say – while still paying the bills in other ways.
Being passionate about what you write is important, because otherwise you’re highly unlikely to find the energy and commitment to finish. A story needs to be burning inside you, wanting to escape. You should love your characters, be fascinated by your themes and want to find out how your story ends.
But good writing is more than just a passion – it’s also a craft. You need to discover the techniques and tips of the trade and then practise them to help you make the project you have in mind as good as it can possibly be – which is where this book and this introductory chapter come in! I lead you through some things to consider before you start writing and discuss the basics of creative writing and creative thinking.
Before you physically start writing, a little preparation is a good idea to get the best out of the valuable time you devote to your writing. In this section I discuss helpful ideas such as setting targets and staying confident, as well as how much you do or don’t need to think about genre, scope and the title of your work before you start writing.
One of the most helpful things you can do when starting any writing project is to set yourself some simple, realistic and achievable goals and targets. Here are a few examples:
Task targets: Such as developing a character, finishing a chapter or planning a scene.Time targets: A certain number of writing sessions of fixed length, such as three half-hour sessions a week.Word targets: A certain number of words or pages, such as 500 words or three pages per week.None of these targets sounds like much, but you may be surprised how much you achieve if you keep going with them week after week.
If you set writing goals that are too optimistic, you’re likely to fail, which undermines your writing instead of supporting it. The good thing about modest targets, especially at the beginning of a project, is that when you exceed them and replace them with slightly more ambitious ones, you can see that you’re making real progress. If you do find that you’re struggling with the targets you’ve set, revise them downwards until you have something that you feel is appropriate for you.
Write down an overall long-term goal as well, such as ‘I’ll have a first draft by this date next year’; it really helps to keep you on track.
Update your goals at regular intervals to keep them relevant and so that you always have something to aim for. Your goals inevitably change as the work develops.
People differ in their strengths and weaknesses: some are planners and others prefer to plunge in and get started. If you’re a planner, plunging in probably makes you feel completely overwhelmed and all at sea, and your story’s likely to peter out quite quickly. Therefore, you’ll find that working out a rough plan or timeline for your story is beneficial, and perhaps even mapping out key scenes before you begin (see Chapters 3 and 19). If you’re a more instinctive writer, and planning is a barrier rather than an aid to progress, just jump in and write every day, and watch your story gradually take shape.
Books are defined principally by their genre. Go into any bookshop or library and you’ll find books listed under headings such as action/adventure, children’s, crime, fantasy, historical, horror, mystery, romance, science fiction, thriller, women’s and young adult.
Literary fiction is usually listed under general fiction but is sometimes considered a genre on its own. Literary fiction is hard to define, but the term is often used to describe books that are original or innovative in form, show deep psychological insight and act metaphorically as well as literally – meaning that you can dip beneath the surface of the story and characters to examine themes or issues or to extract multiple meanings. I cover these sorts of issues and techniques in Chapters 15 and 16.
Before you start writing, a good idea is to consider what genre your story will fall into. Also, read some of the most successful examples of this genre to see how they work. Ask yourself the following types of question:
What’s the rough length of books in your chosen genre?Do they tend to be written from a first-person or a third-person viewpoint and do they contain one or several points of view? (Check out Chapter 8 for more details on point of view.)Are they primarilyplot driven(that is, the story is the most important element, and the characters mainly exist to fulfil a role within it) with lots of action (see Chapter12), orcharacter driven(the characters’ choices and actions drive the story) with lots of internal reflection?Is the language simple and direct with relatively short sentences and paragraphs, or are the sentences more complex with more detailed description, including similes and metaphors? (Chapter 15 has loads of info on these figures of speech and Chapter 11 covers using all the senses for intense descriptions.)Literary fiction tends to be character driven and commercial fiction plot driven, although this isn’t always the case. Many popular and successful novels have well-drawn characters who seem real and that readers can identify with, as well as a well-structured and compelling plot. Thrillers, detective stories and adventure novels tend to fall into the plot-driven category. (The chapters in Part IV have lots of useful information on plot and structure.)
Sometimes people say to me that they don’t want to read other novels in their genre, because they don’t want to be influenced by them. Unfortunately, this often means that they inadvertently write something that’s already been done or that completely fails to match the expectations that readers have when they buy a book in this genre. My mantra is read, read, read! (See the nearby sidebar ‘Taking lessons from other writers’.)
You can discover an enormous amount about writing from reading books, novels and stories of all kinds. When you read, think consciously about the way the book is written. Look to see whether it’s divided into sections, parts and chapters. If so, are the chapters short or long, or varied in length? Are the different parts of equal size? How many points of view and locations exist in the story? (Check out Chapter 20 for loads more on structuring your work.)
Look at the techniques the writer uses to convey the way that people speak in dialogue, to describe a scene or build suspense. See how the plot unfolds, how secrets are hidden and how clues are revealed. Examine how events are foreshadowed and surprises created. (Chapters 4 and 6 discuss dialogue, and Chapters 14 and Chapter 21 creating and maintaining suspense.)
Picking passages you really like from a book and imitating them as closely as possible using your own settings, characters and story can be helpful. It helps you to see how really good fiction works. Consider these to be exercises, like a musician playing scales or an artist making a sketch from a famous painting. You don’t even need to put them in your work in progress, although you can use them, often altered, if they fit.
I was once working on a novel based on my experience of working in a women’s prison. The beginning just wouldn’t come right, so in exasperation I picked up a copy of one of my favourite novels, John le Carré’s The Spy Who Came in from the Cold (1963). It starts with a terse dialogue at Checkpoint Charlie, where the main character is waiting for someone to cross over. I immediately started my novel with a tense dialogue just before the main character meets the disturbed woman who is the focus of the narrative, ditching the first 20 pages I’d written!
However much you’re influenced by other books and other writers – and all writers are – beware of writing something that’s too close to a book that exists already. This can constitute plagiarism – legally defined as the ‘wrongful appropriation, stealing and publication’ of another author’s ‘language, thoughts, ideas or expressions’ and passing them off as your own.
Beware of mixing different genres, and in particular of switching genre mid-novel. A romantic story that suddenly changes into a political satire, or a crime novel where the corpse turns out to have been abducted by aliens, defies publishing conventions and gives readers an unpleasant jolt.
The right title is vital, because it tells readers something important about the story. You don’t need to have a title before you start writing your story. Many writers haven’t found a title until very late in their project or even after it has finished. Occasionally, literary agents or publishers suggest the title or change the one you already have, and sometimes books have different titles in different countries, especially when they’re translated.
You can take your title from different aspects of your story:
Name of the main character or one around which the plot pivots: For example, David Copperfield, Jane Eyre, Ethan Frome, Mrs Dalloway, Emma, Rebecca. You can also use a character’s profession (The Piano Teacher, The Honorary Consul, The Secret Agent, The Professor, The Reluctant Fundamentalist, A Man of the People) or some kind of description of them (The Woman in White, The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas, A Good Man in Africa, The Woman Who Went to Bed for a Year).Relationship between two characters: For example, The Magician’s Nephew, The Time Traveller’s Wife, The French Lieutenant’s Woman, Sons and Lovers, The Spy Who Loved Me.Significant place: For example, Wuthering Heights, Mansfield Park, Revolutionary Road, Middlemarch, Solaris, Gorky Park.Theme of the book: For example, War and Peace, Crime and Punishment, Pride and Prejudice, The End of the Affair, The Sense of an Ending.
Biblical or literary quotation: For example, East of Eden, Gone with the Wind, For Whom the Bell Tolls, Present Laughter, The Darling Buds of May. Or you can adapt one, for example, By Grand Central Station I Sat Down and Wept.Significant object: For example, Brighton Rock, The Golden Bowl, The Subtle Knife, The Moonstone, The Scarlet Letter.Central element of the plot: For example, The Hunt for Red October, The Voyage of the Dawn Treader, Around the World in Eighty Days, Looking for Mr. Goodbar, The War Between the Tates, On Her Majesty’s Secret Service.Word or phrase buried deep in the story: For example, in Raymond Chandler’s The Big Sleep, the phrase comes on the last page.The now famous titles of many books weren’t the author’s first choices: George Orwell’s 1984 was going to be called The Last Man in Europe, To Kill a Mockingbird was going to be Atticus before Harper Lee decided the title was too narrowly focused on one character, and Jane Austen’s original title for Pride and Prejudice was First Impressions.
Books often have different titles in different countries, even when they share the same language. For example, Laurie Lee’s Cider with Rosie was published in the US as Edge of Day, and Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone was Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone. The Bridges of Madison County was originally published with the title Love in Black and White, and only became a bestseller after the title was changed.
The title can be the first thing that comes to an author, though. Jonas Jonasson, author of The Hundred-year-old Man Who Climbed Out of the Window and Disappeared, so loved the title after he thought it up that he felt compelled to write the book itself!
The title you choose highlights in readers’ minds a certain element in the story. For example, The Hobbit’s alternative title was There and Back Again, which emphasised the journey the main character takes.
Don’t let not having a good title stop you from getting started or indeed finishing your book!
You may not find the final title of your story or novel for some time, but try this to help you get at least a working one:
Make a list of different possible titles for your story from each of the preceding categories. Think about which one you like best and why.Pick a working title for your story. Having one to hand often helps even if you decide to change it later.Don’t worry too much about fixing the scope of your book before you start writing or even while you’re drafting it. Many writers find that their story changes and grows as they write it. A novel you begin as a light-hearted romance may take a dark turn when the handsome love interest turns out to be concealing a terrible secret; a crime story can transform into an exposé of the poverty and suffering of a marginalised community; a straightforward thriller may turn out to have a supernatural element.
Sometimes only at the end of a draft do you really know who your characters are and have a good idea of where the story is going. So just keep drafting and leave editing and rewriting until much later. You can always go back and transform the first part of your story so that it fits in with your later discoveries, or expand your original idea to accommodate a new idea or additional characters (see Chapter 22).
If your story takes an unexpected turn, don’t stop yourself from writing. If you block yourself because you want to stick to your original idea or are surprised by some of the material coming through, you’ll almost certainly find that all the life goes out of your writing.
The foreword to the second edition of JRR Tolkien’s The Lord of the Rings (1955, George Allen & Unwin) begins with the words: ‘This tale grew in the telling’. Tolkien started writing a sequel to The Hobbit, but the story took over and turned into a massive three-volume epic aimed more at adults than children.
I believe that drafting out your entire story before you start to edit anything is best (I discuss editing in Chapters 24 to 26). I read about novelists who write a thousand words in the morning, edit their text and then move on the next day. This may work for experienced writers (though not all), but it’s seldom useful when you’re starting out. As soon as you look at your work, that voice starts up in your head saying, ‘This is rubbish; it’s never going to work. You’ll never make it as a writer. Go back and change everything.’ Somehow, you have to find out how to banish that voice!
The best way I know to get rid of that voice is not to edit at all while you’re at an early stage. Just keep writing. Resist the temptation to go back and look at what you’ve written previously, unless you really have to check a fact such as what name you gave a character or on what day of the week a certain event happened. But don’t get out that red pen or turn on the word processor’s track changes function and start going over your work, because you may soon find that you have no writing left! You have plenty of time to go over what you’ve written when you get to the end of your draft.
In this section I have a look at the various stages involved when you want to write a novel, a piece of narrative non-fiction or a series of short stories.
No single right way to set about any creative process can apply to everyone: different people find that different methods of working are best for them. At the beginning, just try out a few different ways of working until you find what clicks with you.
When you start writing, the important thing to do is just to gain confidence.
Get a notebook, pen and paper or the kind of computer that suits you – laptop, tablet, desktop – and jot down ideas, anecdotes, sketches, key phrases, character outlines and memories. Write down anything you like, as long as you’re writing. If you have a particular project in mind or a story that you want to tell, just write down anything connected with it. At this stage, you simply want to get your pen moving or some words on the screen, so that you have some material to work with. I talk more about recording and using ideas in Chapter 2.
Sometimes when you start a project you have an idea of a key scene: maybe two characters meeting, having an argument or confrontation, or a character discovering something, someone having an important realisation, or a dramatic event taking place. Sometimes ideas come from a family story or something that happened to you or someone you know. If this type of situation applies, begin writing from these starting points.
At this point, don’t worry about the quality of what you write: just begin somewhere. The more you get down on paper or on screen, the more confident and skilful your writing becomes. Developing your writing voice takes time, and so don’t hurry it or expect too much too soon.
If you find that you’re constantly struggling to get started at the beginning of each writing session, try leaving a sentence unfinished so that you can complete it when you next sit down. Alternatively, try making a list of ideas. Usually, getting started takes a while, but then your mind is buzzing by the end of a session and ideas arise more freely – so take advantage of this to help you get started next time.
Here’s an exercise to ensure that you always have a repository of ideas to turn to whenever you’re stuck. Write down three of the following:
Significant memories from your character’s past: These can be adapted from your own memories. Check out Chapter 3 and Chapter 19 for how to use memories.Facts about your main characters: Check out Chapter 3 for how to give them convincing backgrounds and Chapter 5 for detail on creating them physically. Chapters 4 and 6 guide you through teaching them to speak.Objects your main character possesses: Chapter 13 has several tips on this aspect.Incidents your main character can experience: Read Chapter 18 for all about plotting events for your characters.Desires or fears of your main character: Chapters 7 and 9 discuss providing characters with complex inner lives.Writing a whole book is going to take you a long time, and so don’t put undue pressure on yourself by trying to get it all done too quickly. Slow and steady is the best way forwards. If you’re always rushing ahead to get onto the next scene, you don’t allow yourself the challenge and the pleasure of going deeply into the scene that you’re writing now.
The fashionable Buddhist concept of mindfulness is really useful for creative writing, because you want to create a space in which you and your characters deeply experience the ‘now’ of your story. If you’re constantly thinking back to previous scenes and worrying that they aren’t good enough, or stressing about what on earth you’re going to write next, you can’t slow down and concentrate on what’s happening to your writing or your characters in the present moment.
Every paragraph or page that you write is an important step towards your goal.
Writing a book isn’t a linear process: you don’t start at the beginning and go in a straight line towards the end. On the contrary, sometimes you seem to be going backwards rather than forwards, round and round in circles or not going anywhere at all!
I prefer to see my writing as being like walking on a spiral path, sometimes facing backwards, sometimes forwards, but always moving slowly towards my goal. You get a whole lot of writing done only to discover yourself back with the same scene or dilemma or conflict that you were wrestling with earlier. However, you’re never exactly back in the same place, because you’ve learned a whole lot more about your characters and your story in the meantime, and so you can write the scene again better than you did the first time around.
The single most helpful tool for developing your creative writing skills is to do creative writing exercises: quick, focused pieces of work that you can complete in 5 to 20 minutes. This book is chock-full of such useful exercises designed to illustrate different aspects of the writing process.
When doing these exercises, I suggest you get started right away and just jot down the first thing that comes into your head without thinking too much about it. These spontaneous and unedited thoughts are often the most useful. As you get used to doing the exercises, jumping in and writing straight away without much prior thought or effort gets easier and easier.
Sometimes you don’t see the point of an exercise or feel that what you’ve written is never going to fit into your story. This doesn’t matter. You almost certainly learned something useful and are mastering techniques to put into use at another time or in another place. Don’t worry if the results of the exercise don’t always seem that great – they’re quick writing exercises and no one is expecting prefect prose!
Some of the exercises involve random prompts or elements you can introduce into your story. One problem with writing is the feeling that you have to supply all the ingredients out of your own head, which isn’t the way real life works – after all, you don’t choose the weather, who sits next to you on the bus or what strange object a friend will leave behind in your house! Read Chapter 13 for more on creative use of objects in your stories.
Using random elements from your environment enables you to create a more complex and lifelike story, as well as giving you new ideas that you can often connect in a fresh and original way.
In a non-creative project, having lots of notebooks and computer files with slightly different versions of the same thing is a bad sign. But creative projects, particularly in their early stages, benefit from this level of uncertainty. Having five separate start plans and three endings is fine (I discuss writing openings and endings in Chapters 17 and 23), as is having no clear idea of on what day of the week different events in your story happen.
Resist the urge to ‘tidy’ your work as you go. A far better idea is to keep writing and then return when you have a first draft to make your final selections and examine the finer details. Don’t expect your writing to come out perfectly first time. You have to adjust to a certain amount of chaos. Many people resist the messiness involved in producing creative work, but it’s inevitable if you want to produce something worthwhile.
Writing in chaos doesn’t mean, however, that your writing space has to be a complete tip (although mine often is when I’m in the middle of a project). Some people just can’t work in a messy environment. However, others can’t work if everything is too neat and tidy. Find out what kind of person you are, and don’t fight against it.
Consider these tips to help you create some order in the chaos:
Get different coloured notebooks or one with different coloured pages. Write plot ideas in the blue notebook (or on the blue pages), character things in the red, random observations in yellow and so on. This approach makes finding something you’ve written far easier later on.Give chapters working titles. Do so even if you aren’t going to keep them in the end.Write a brief summary of what happens at the top of each chapter. This helps you to find key scenes easily.Number and title computer files for easy reference. Group them in folders and subfolders.Keep everything. Buy box files and folders to store your material.One area in which you may need to be systematic is in sorting files on your computer. Because you can’t access things on a computer at a glance as you can with a notebook or typescript, you can easily lose track of what you’ve written. Create folders with headings such as ‘notes’, ‘sketches’, ‘characters’ (use the names of your main characters) and clearly number each draft. Give chapters a working title in the file name so that you can identify what each chapter is about with no hassle.
People learn by making mistakes. Many creative breakthroughs occur when you make a mistake. If you keep going along a safe track, you never discover the exciting avenues you may have gone down if you’d allowed yourself a little more latitude. It’s a bit like tourists who stick to the main areas instead of exploring the interesting backstreets where they may discover a charming café or hidden gem.
You often need to start a story or try out a scene in a particular way in order to discover that it isn’t working. You’re working without knowing enough about the world of your story, and so you’re bound to make false starts and go down dead ends. Sometimes you may go down a side turning and realise that lovely as the scene you’ve written is, it doesn’t belong in the narrative you’re currently writing. You can always file these scenes for later in the story or for another project. Sometimes, however, you discover something absolutely vital to your story that you hadn’t realised before. Unless you write the scene, you’ll never know which way it’ll go or whether it’ll introduce something new and exciting into your story.
The more you write, the more you develop a kind of instinct that helps you discard certain options in advance. But when you begin, you really don’t know what’s going to be best, and you never will know – unless you try out different approaches.
Almost all writers create far more material than they ever use in their final version, but this doesn’t matter. What you see in the finished book is a bit like the one-tenth of an iceberg that appears above the surface of the water. The rest of the material may be hidden or discarded, but it’s still a vital part of creating your story.
If you like to plan, you often find that your story refuses to stick to the structure you work out in advance. Maybe you planned that halfway through your novel, character A would divorce character B, but when you get there you realise that your character would never have the courage to confront his wife. You then have to restructure the second part of the book, and the result is usually far stronger than if you’d stuck to your original plan.
Think about making a film: it usually needs a large number of ‘takes’ to get a scene absolutely as the director wants it. And some of the items that ended up in Picasso’s wastepaper basket have been sold for huge sums of money!
Writers who’ve made ‘mistakes’ and had to correct them include Sir Arthur Conan Doyle and Ian Fleming, who both killed off their heroes, Sherlock Holmes and James Bond, only to have to backtrack later. The inventor of Sherlock Holmes needed some ingenuity to explain how his character survived what seemed a certain death. When JRR Tolkien wrote the original version of The Hobbit, he hadn’t yet decided that Bilbo’s ring was the One Ring, and so Gollum wasn’t overly upset when he lost it. After publishing The Lord of the Rings, Tolkien had to go back and correct this incident for all future editions of The Hobbit.
One of the most important things I want to stress is that when you start out as a writer you must write what you want to write and not allow yourself to be persuaded by anyone to write anything else. Even if you’re not sure precisely what you want to write, and your thoughts seem a bit confused at first, don’t change what you’re writing in order to comply with other people’s ideas; after all, you’ve not written your novel before, and so some uncertainty is inevitable.
You write best when you write the kind of fiction you like to read. Many novelists say that they write the books they want to read – the books didn’t exist before, and so they had to create them!
Use this exercise to help you clarify what you love about other people’s books:
Make a list of your top ten favourite books of all time.Mull over what you love about them: characters, plot (see Chapter18), setting (see Chapter10) or perhaps a mixture of all three.See whether you can spot any similarities in theme, structure or writing style.Nobody’s forcing you to write; you do so because you want to, for its own sake, and not because you feel that you ought to write or you think it’s going make you rich and famous. So if you’re going to take the time and trouble, you may as well write the book you really want to write and not the book you think will appeal to others.
Books and writing are personal. Some writers I can’t stand and others I love, and the books I love sometimes leave other people cold. Some books were bestsellers in their time but have long been out of print and forgotten, while other books that were rejected or reviled at the time are now highly respected. Some people will like what you write and others will hate it.
Don’t try to please everybody, because you won’t. As the saying goes, in trying to please everyone you almost inevitably end up pleasing nobody.
Never worry about what anyone else may think of your work. As soon as you do, you start restricting your writing to fit in with what you think others would like or consider appropriate, or to conceal aspects of yourself you think people may disapprove of.
In particular, don’t worry about what literary agents or publishers may think in the early stages of a project. When you begin, you’re so far away from being published that thinking about it in any way except as a distant and ultimate goal is pointless. It often just causes you to freeze and give up.
Many people think they have to write in a special way when they’re writing fiction, to develop a distinctive ‘voice’ or ‘style’ that impresses people. Many published writers do have an individual and recognisable style, but usually they took many years to develop it. I think that all writers have their own voice, just as you can usually recognise everyone you know by the sound of their unique, individual voice. The best way to develop your writing voice is simply to write as clearly, directly and unaffectedly as you can.
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